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This was inspierd by me actualy ^^; well when i say that i noticed something about myeslf that is so very true to me. I can guide others at the shake of a stick but i can't guide myself :rofl: it's so true most humans are like that i can't say i've met any person who hasen't had that problem in life lol
Any way this also is inspierd but my very forst dream of Reikan :) (YES THIS IS HOW SHE WAS CREATED) she was me in wolf form, i followed another wolf in my dream who showed me a forest like this one that i've drawn and he pushed me to look in to it, he never even come with me but the thing is i knew my way round it even if it changed about :o i come out impressed with myself and then the wolf wasen't there...so i'm wondering was he telling me something about myself or was it just some freaky dream?
Well any way to go along with this dream there was words in my head too :o and it went something like this:

Follow me
In to the depths of this forest...
Thought the darkness...
Follow me...
In to the twisted maze of Insanity...
Through the creapy trees...
Follow me...
In to your fears...
Though your deepest nightmars...
Follow me...
In to the shadows...
Through a palce i only know...
Follow me...
In to this twisted maze...
Through the madness of the dark...
Follow me...
Run with me...
Though my labyrinth.

Now you tell me if thats creapy? heck it was that wierd i rememberd it all ^^;
Any way hope you like the art cos i love it...NOW BACK TO WORK WITH ME!!! i'm soooo gonna die if my works not done but i coulden't risist this ^^;

Art, poem thingy and character belongs to me.

Critiques


:iconunderworlder666:
So as my first Critique I'll take a whack at this piece.

As in a sense of literature the piece written below was in depth of the writers mind. One receives a feel for her current emotion, also depicted in the art itself. ‘Follow me’ through anything. One feels the devotion the author has for whomever she is speaking to.

As for the picture itself it is well done. I greatly enjoy the entire composition of the piece. The dark, eerie and unknown nameless void that the character is asking to ‘Follow me’ through. Its classic. Along with the characters placement and minimum lighting.

In all outlook of specs this piece deserves praise and recognition, regardless if you are a fan of anthros (furries) or not.

The only thing I would say in regards to the poem is to let more of your emotion out through uncommon words or phrases especially when they are based on dreams, which aren't alwasy clear cut. Be less direct to the point, it’ll give the reader something to dwell about. Other than that, I would ask you to never change a thing.

All in all, great job Reikan-chan. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more poems/proses and art like this from you.

It’d look real fly as a desktop, off centered to either side. :3
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:iconhyperjon:
Nice, surely something =D

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Dark and Light which Path will I choose only fate will Decide. My spirit belongs to the Wolf, my sipirit is dark and I walk my path alone, I hope I can find atleast some glmer of light.
:iconjxw:
this is so cool; the background, the blue effects, everything so awsome XD
:iconnes-equas-bes7:
LOL dreams are epic win arnt they XD my most favourite dream i ever had was when i was a kid, i had a dream that i was getting chased around the house by giant red pretsals, it was just me and my bro in the house, trying to hide from them, then my baby sitter arrived (kylie) and it turned out she was a super hero, and sent the pretsals back to space (which is apparently were pretsals come from in my dreams) LOL, why are dreams so crazy? or is it just me? =/

Anyway awsome pic as always reikan =)

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Its NES :giggle:
Pronounced NEZ :)
Not Ness :(
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ART THOU BORED!!! [link] beef spice beef spice...
:iconeffit:
Wow, Reikan, this is really cool.
All I'm saying.

Well, not really. :P
Fabulous lighting from that... stick thingy, and the expression is spot on. Great colour mixing.
And fantastic dreampoemthingy!
That's like commercial quality, so Imma copy it down before it gets sold. >_>

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Let's take a blast to the moon, baby...

Sonic art isn't all I do. I'm not some petty mindless fanboy! I have yet to submit much but it, though.
:iconprojects20:
good work..

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御社のサービスにスティッチ
Stitch at your service

声を出して笑う
lol
:iconatomick1death2angel:
:D awesome drawing!
XD your dreams scare me~
the song's really cool :\ don't really understand dreams since i don't dream much myself (ohoho, a really plain weird dreams if so. and i usually don't remember them) so i don't really know how to translate it.
XD i love the pose and the way you shaded!

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Muda na jikan ni mirai wa aru no? Konna tokoro ni watashi wa iru no?
Watashi no koto wo iitai naraba kotoba ni suru no nara [rokudenashi] ...
:iconelementalpsychosis:
Woooo.... that is icredibly epic!!!!!

What I love about this... erm... the way you've lit Reikan, the bg... and... I want her staff now... IT LIGHTS UP WITH ONE HELLISH COOL GLOW!!!!

And scarfling's cute too... though he does look like he'll lash out a bit if someone moves in too close ^^;
:iconreikan-chan:
Thanks alot :hug: oh and you know what we have for you don't you? :excited:

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For you, the day Reikan graced your planet was the most important day of your life.
But for me, it was Tuesday.
:iconvextreme:
>X3 i'd follow Rei anywhere :rofl:

really realy great pic, it definately sets the mood for adventure >X3

*follows Rei, watchin her ass* ...... ^^; eh heh heh... *punched*

:XD: and now the mood is ruined :lmao:

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:iconreikan-chan:
Thanks alot :hug: :D

:giggle: how far would you follow her?

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For you, the day Reikan graced your planet was the most important day of your life.
But for me, it was Tuesday.

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