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Critiques
As in a sense of literature the piece written below was in depth of the writers mind. One receives a feel for her current emotion, also depicted in the art itself. ‘Follow me’ through anything. One feels the devotion the author has for whomever she is speaking to.
As for the picture itself it is well done. I greatly enjoy the entire composition of the piece. The dark, eerie and unknown nameless void that the character is asking to ‘Follow me’ through. Its classic. Along with the characters placement and minimum lighting.
In all outlook of specs this piece deserves praise and recognition, regardless if you are a fan of anthros (furries) or not.
The only thing I would say in regards to the poem is to let more of your emotion out through uncommon words or phrases especially when they are based on dreams, which aren't alwasy clear cut. Be less direct to the point, it’ll give the reader something to dwell about. Other than that, I would ask you to never change a thing.
All in all, great job Reikan-chan. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more poems/proses and art like this from you.
It’d look real fly as a desktop, off centered to either side. :3
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